Steven Lico
2/11/10
SCENE #1: ESTABLISHING SHOT - A GIANT MANION, BENTLEY PARKED IN DRIVEWAY
TWO PEOPLE ARE SEEN IN FRONT OF THE HOUSE. DANICA PATRICK IS SEEN UP FRONT WHILE LOLA IS TO THE SIDE OF THE CAR.
KEYBOARD LOOP
DANICA: Meet Lola….
LOLA: Hm..Hm..Mh
SCENE #2: CLOSE-UP SHOT – PORTRAIT OF LOLA, THE NAME “LARRY JONES” IS CROSSED OUT IN PINK READING “LOLA”
KEYBOARD LOOP
DANICA: The day Lola retired from football…
AUDIO: Crowd cheering
SCENE #3: MIDDLE SHOT- DANICA SEEN IN FRONT OF LOLA’S PORTRAIT
KEYBOARD LOOP
DANICA: Lola started chasing his biggest dream…
SCENE #4: SLOW ZOOM OF LOLA INSPECTING LINGERIE ON MODEL
KEYBOARD LOOP
DANICA ENTERS
DANICA: A business of his own, Lola’s first step …
SCENE #5: CLOSE-UP OF LOLA
KEYBOARD LOOP
DANICA: He built his website with GoDaddy.com
LOLA: Mmmhmmm
SCENE #5: MIDDLE SHOT OF LOLA AT COMPUTER, DANICA ENTERS
KEYBOARD LOOP
DANICA:… And with GoDaddy’s easy to use commerce tools, Lola…
SCENE #6: OVER THE SHOULDER SHOT OF LOLA’S MONITORS OF GODADDY.COM
KEYBOARD LOOP
DANICA: Lola, was soon selling his line to he world
SCENE #7: MIDDLE SHOT OF LOLA
KEYBOARD LOOP
LOLA: OOH-WEE!
SCENE #8: MIDDLE SHOT OF POOL AND MANSION, DANICA IS SITTING WHILE LOLA FLOATS BY
DANICA: Lola dreams big…
LOLA: Uh-Huh
DANICA: … And who’s to argue
SCENE #9: ADD EFFECTS- “GO DADDY” LOGO
DANICA: SEE MORE NOW AT GODADDY.COM
END.
Hey Steve,
ReplyDeleteThis is SATISFACTORY work.
You can make it EXCELLENT by:
1. Embedding the actual Lola video.
2. Reducing the size of your text to make it read more professionally.
3. Check spelling, grammar etc.
Go for it!
Dr. W